Make an editorial pass over the 9.0 release notes.

This is mostly about grammar, style, and presentation, though I did find
a few small factual errors.
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Tom Lane 2010-08-23 02:43:25 +00:00
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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.306 2010/08/22 02:37:32 momjian Exp $ -->
<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.307 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->
<chapter Id="runtime-config">
<title>Server Configuration</title>
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</row>
<row>
<entry><literal>%e</literal></entry>
<entry>SQL state</entry>
<entry>SQLSTATE error code</entry>
<entry>no</entry>
</row>
<row>
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<para>
<application>Syslog</> produces its own
time stamp and process ID information, so you probably do not want to
use those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>.
include those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>.
</para>
</tip>
</listitem>
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virtual transaction ID,
regular transaction ID,
error severity,
SQL state code,
SQLSTATE code,
error message,
error message detail,
hint,

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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.95 2010/08/20 13:59:45 tgl Exp $ -->
<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.96 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->
<chapter id="ddl">
<title>Data Definition</title>
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</para>
</sect2>
<sect2>
<sect2 id="ddl-constraints-exclusion">
<title>Exclusion constraints</title>
<indexterm>

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