Make an editorial pass over the 9.0 release notes.

This is mostly about grammar, style, and presentation, though I did find
a few small factual errors.
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Tom Lane 2010-08-23 02:43:25 +00:00
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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.306 2010/08/22 02:37:32 momjian Exp $ --> <!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.307 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->
<chapter Id="runtime-config"> <chapter Id="runtime-config">
<title>Server Configuration</title> <title>Server Configuration</title>
@ -3507,7 +3507,7 @@ local0.* /var/log/postgresql
</row> </row>
<row> <row>
<entry><literal>%e</literal></entry> <entry><literal>%e</literal></entry>
<entry>SQL state</entry> <entry>SQLSTATE error code</entry>
<entry>no</entry> <entry>no</entry>
</row> </row>
<row> <row>
@ -3578,7 +3578,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
<para> <para>
<application>Syslog</> produces its own <application>Syslog</> produces its own
time stamp and process ID information, so you probably do not want to time stamp and process ID information, so you probably do not want to
use those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>. include those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>.
</para> </para>
</tip> </tip>
</listitem> </listitem>
@ -3705,7 +3705,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;
virtual transaction ID, virtual transaction ID,
regular transaction ID, regular transaction ID,
error severity, error severity,
SQL state code, SQLSTATE code,
error message, error message,
error message detail, error message detail,
hint, hint,

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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.95 2010/08/20 13:59:45 tgl Exp $ --> <!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.96 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->
<chapter id="ddl"> <chapter id="ddl">
<title>Data Definition</title> <title>Data Definition</title>
@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ CREATE TABLE order_items (
</para> </para>
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2> <sect2 id="ddl-constraints-exclusion">
<title>Exclusion constraints</title> <title>Exclusion constraints</title>
<indexterm> <indexterm>

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