Doc: more tweaking of v15 release notes.

Per suggestions from Justin Pryzby.

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220925215009.GC21938@telsasoft.com
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Tom Lane 2022-09-26 14:32:51 -04:00
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@ -1096,8 +1096,8 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
</para>
<para>
This only works if <literal>max_wal_senders=0</literal>
and <literal>wal_level=minimal</literal>.
This only works if <literal>max_wal_senders = 0</literal>
and <literal>wal_level = minimal</literal>.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -1837,7 +1837,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akapila@postgresql.org>
</para>
<para>
In some cases a partition child table could appear more than once.
In some cases a partition could appear more than once.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2186,8 +2186,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
When applying <link
linkend="functions-datetime-zoneconvert"><literal>AT
TIME ZONE</literal></link> to a <type>time with time zone</type>
value, use the transaction start time not wall clock time to
determine whether DST applies (Aleksander Alekseev, Tom Lane)
value, use the transaction start time rather than wall clock time
to determine whether DST applies (Aleksander Alekseev, Tom Lane)
</para>
<para>
@ -2480,14 +2480,15 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
<listitem>
<para>
Adjust <application>psql</application> so that Readline's
Adjust <application>psql</application> so
that <application>Readline</application>'s
meta-<literal>#</literal> command will insert a double-hyphen
comment marker (Tom Lane)
</para>
<para>
Previously a pound marker was inserted, but that's pretty
unhelpful in SQL.
Previously a pound marker was inserted, unless the user had taken
the trouble to configure a non-default comment marker.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2712,7 +2713,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
</para>
<para>
New options are <literal>server</literal> to write the
The new options are <literal>server</literal> to write the
backup locally and <literal>blackhole</literal> to discard the
backup (for testing).
</para>
@ -2873,9 +2874,8 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
<para>
Previously such files were left in the current directory,
requiring manual cleanup. It's still necessary to remove them
manually afterwards, but now one can just remove that whole
subdirectory.
requiring manual cleanup. Now they are automatically removed on
successful completion of <application>pg_upgrade</application>.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -2926,7 +2926,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
<listitem>
<para>
Make <application>pg_upgrade</application> preserve tablespace
and database OIDs, as well as table relfilenode numbers
and database OIDs, as well as relation relfilenode numbers
(Shruthi KC, Antonin Houska)
</para>
</listitem>