doc PG 17 relnotes: wording fixes

Reported-by: Elena Indrupskaya

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/22110133-bca5-4a99-889c-aa0096423456@postgrespro.ru

Author: Elena Indrupskaya

Backpatch-through: master
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Bruce Momjian 2024-05-14 20:42:55 -04:00
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@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
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Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end of in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end in interval values (Joseph Koshakow)
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@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.vondra@postgresql.org>
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Allow a BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
Allow BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent)
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@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ Allow the creation of WAL summarization files (Robert Haas, Nathan Bossart, Hube
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These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range, and is useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range and are useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables
summarize_wal and wal_summarize_keep_time, and introspected with pg_available_wal_summaries(), pg_wal_summary_contents(), and pg_get_wal_summarizer_state().
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@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ Allow the application of logical replication changes to use hash indexes on the
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Previously only btree indexes could be use for this purpose.
Previously only btree indexes could be used for this purpose.
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@ -2229,7 +2229,7 @@ Allow pg_basebackup and pg_receivewal to use dbname in their connection specific
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This is useful for connection poolers who are sensitive to the database name.
This is useful for connection poolers that are sensitive to the database name.
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@ -2390,7 +2390,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
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Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)
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