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<title>The Source Code Repository</title>
<para>
The <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> source code is stored and managed using the
<productname>Git</productname> version control system. An public mirror of this
is available and updated within a minute of the master repository.
The <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> source code is stored and managed
using the <productname>Git</productname> version control system. A public
mirror of the master repository is available; it is updated within a minute
of any change to the master repository.
</para>
<para>
Our wiki, <ulink
url="http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Working_with_Git"></ulink>,
has additional details on working with Git.
has some discussion on working with Git.
</para>
<para>
Note that building <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> from the source
repository requires reasonably up-to-date versions of <application>bison</>
and <application>flex</>. These tools are not needed to build from a
distribution tarball since their output is included in the file.
You will need Perl as well, but otherwise the tool requirements are the
same.
repository requires reasonably up-to-date versions of <application>bison</>,
<application>flex</>, and <application>Perl</>. These tools are not needed
to build from a distribution tarball since the files they are used to build
are included in the tarball. Other tool requirements are the same as shown
in <xref linkend="installation">.
</para>
<sect1 id="git">
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<para>
With <productname>Git</> you will make a copy of the entire code repository
to your local machine, so you will have access to all history and branches
on your local machine, so you will have access to all history and branches
offline. This is the fastest and most flexible way to develop or test
patches.
</para>
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<step>
<para>
You will need an installed version of <productname>Git</>, which you can get
from <ulink url="http://git-scm.com"></ulink>. Many systems also have a recent
version of <application>Git</> installed by default, or available in their
package repository system.
You will need an installed version of <productname>Git</>, which you can
get from <ulink url="http://git-scm.com"></ulink>. Many systems already
have a recent version of <application>Git</> installed by default, or
available in their package distribution system.
</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>
To being using the Git repository, make a clone of the official mirror:
To begin using the Git repository, make a clone of the official mirror:
<programlisting>
git clone git://git.postgresql.org/git/postgresql.git
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This will copy the full repository to your local machine, so it may take
a while to complete, especially if you have a slow Internet connection.
The files will be placed in a new subdirectory <filename>postgresql</> of
your current directory.
</para>
<para>
The Git mirror can also be reached via the HTTP protocol in case for example
a firewall is blocking access to the Git protocol. Just replace the URL
like:
The Git mirror can also be reached via the HTTP protocol, if for example
a firewall is blocking access to the Git protocol. Just change the URL
prefix to <literal>http</>, as in:
<programlisting>
git clone http://git.postgresql.org/git/postgresql.git
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</para>
</step>
</procedure>
<para>
<productname>Git</> can do a lot more things than just fetch the source. For
more information, consult the man pages for the product, or the website at
<ulink url="http://git-scm.com"></>.
more information, consult the <productname>Git</> man pages, or see the
website at <ulink url="http://git-scm.com"></>.
</para>
</sect1>