From acd4f44fe1ab9da325f508a5d37a542e593d2822 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Paquier Date: Tue, 25 Jan 2022 10:49:48 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix some grammar This is an extraction of the user-visible changes done in 410aa24, including all the relevant documentation parts. Author: Justin Pryzby Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220124030001.GQ23027@telsasoft.com Backpatch-through: 10 --- doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml | 2 +- doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml | 7 +++---- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml index 8fcbdb6b4b..2084c7fa3c 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml @@ -1975,7 +1975,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are: streaming starts on timeline tli; otherwise, the server's current timeline is selected. The server can reply with an error, for example if the requested section of WAL has already - been recycled. On success, server responds with a CopyBothResponse + been recycled. On success, the server responds with a CopyBothResponse message, and then starts to stream WAL to the frontend. diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml index 9a4a03d147..488372e476 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/ref/pg_receivewal.sgml @@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation First, scan the directory where the WAL segment files are written and - find the newest completed segment file, using as starting point the - beginning of the next WAL segment file. This is calculated independently - on the compression method used to compress each segment. + find the newest completed segment file, using as the starting point the + beginning of the next WAL segment file. @@ -93,7 +92,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation If a starting point cannot be calculated with the previous method, the latest WAL flush location is used as reported by the server from - a IDENTIFY_SYSTEM command. + an IDENTIFY_SYSTEM command.