doc: Fix some grammar

This is an extraction of the user-visible changes done in 410aa24,
including all the relevant documentation parts.

Author: Justin Pryzby
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20220124030001.GQ23027@telsasoft.com
Backpatch-through: 10
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Michael Paquier 2022-01-25 10:49:48 +09:00
parent 4ec54498c5
commit acd4f44fe1
2 changed files with 4 additions and 5 deletions

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@ -1975,7 +1975,7 @@ The commands accepted in replication mode are:
streaming starts on timeline <replaceable class="parameter">tli</replaceable>;
otherwise, the server's current timeline is selected. The server can
reply with an error, for example if the requested section of WAL has already
been recycled. On success, server responds with a CopyBothResponse
been recycled. On success, the server responds with a CopyBothResponse
message, and then starts to stream WAL to the frontend.
</para>

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@ -83,9 +83,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
<listitem>
<para>
First, scan the directory where the WAL segment files are written and
find the newest completed segment file, using as starting point the
beginning of the next WAL segment file. This is calculated independently
on the compression method used to compress each segment.
find the newest completed segment file, using as the starting point the
beginning of the next WAL segment file.
</para>
</listitem>
@ -93,7 +92,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
<para>
If a starting point cannot be calculated with the previous method,
the latest WAL flush location is used as reported by the server from
a <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command.
an <literal>IDENTIFY_SYSTEM</literal> command.
</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>